Proofing Posts

I just went through and made edits to all 5 posts that were up. I was just as guilty as the rest of you guys, but please read through your posts before you submit them, it makes things far easier to read for everyone else.

Pay attention to the time stamps, I have had to adjust them, to make sure they fit in. If your post takes place after a significant event, but your character makes no mention of it, it feels out of place. Just put your time stamp BEFORE the event, so it all makes sense.

Oops, did I miss something about when the explosion happened? I didn't understand the time change, but now I do.

Your character seemed to have slept through it, it seemed...I just adjusted the time a bit to prevent it from being an issue.